Stories in a Safe Haven

This is a picture of a scene that happens in the book "Munoraku"  www.amazon.com/gp/product/B00D… Its when a sandstorm blows in and they find this place to stay safe.  While they wait for the storm to pass, they exchange stories.  And its Kruda's turn

Kruda, "This Human was a persistent one.  He followed me deep into the woods in hope that I lead him right to our nest.  I passed by a big bolder and just hid behind it, and when the human passed by, I got him!"

Neolko, "What happened then?"

Kruda, "I took this blade and shoved it straight into his neck and gave it a good twist!  Then I skinned that human! I took his flesh off his body as revenge to what they did to my people, I found it fitting.  But I gave him the luxury of being dead before I skinned him."

I am rather happy with this one, I packed alot of detail that no one is going to appreciate.  I even have several bugs in there so you can have a glimpse of the Munoraku ecosystem.  And I hope the readers enjoy this one, please tell me everything you think about it